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The Clockwork Girl

Book Released: 24 Oct 2007
Posted 31 Oct 2007

Writer: Sean O'Reilly, Kevin Hanna
Artist: Grant Bond, Kevin Hanna
Artist: Grant Bond (cover)
Letters: Shawn Depasquale
Publisher: Arcana Studios


 2.50 out of 5 Stars

Reviewed by Louis Vitela

 


I hate first issues. I occasionally say this aloud in my comic shop and invariably find myself at the center of a sudden, horrified silence from the patrons around me. I break the silence by explaining myself: I read comics for the stories, and there’s too often too little story in a first issue. Much of the time a first issue’s pages will be taken up with setting or exposition and by the time I’ve reached the back cover I’m left with no story and not much reason to consider buying the second issue. Unfortunately, The Clockwork Girl is in this category for me.

“A curb-hanger rather than a cliff-hanger, The Clockwork Girl ends with very little to propel readers to the next issue.”

The readers are introduced to the story via the trite but quaint phrase, “In a land far, far away…” after which we are immediately verbally bludgeoned with the proposed theme: the power of nature versus the power of technology. While not a flagrant misuse of the comics medium, why not let the reader glean the theme from the story and the dialogue rather than blurting it out? Also, the theme as stated is not terribly well supported, at least in this first issue. The characters who are meant to champion each side of the theme are themselves both scientists and creators and seem far too similar to represent opposing forces. The overriding theme is more likely Man as Creator, a powerful theme that recurs often in literature and myth (Shelley’s Frankenstein and the Greek myth of Pygmalion come to mind).

For the most part, the characters in Clockwork Girl only pretend to have depth and never move beyond the gleeful mad scientist persona. Indeed, this comic sports a roomful of mad scientists, each clad in a double-breasted lab coat and rubber gauntlets, itself pretty amusing. Although scientist Dendrus (champion of nature, as per the theme) will possibly prove to be the more level-headed of the bunch, he’s still the ethically-challenged creator of Huxley the Amazing Monster Boy. The reader is immediately sympathetic to Huxley in that his only crime is having been created. I found myself not so sympathetic to Dendrus: he created the boy, gave him the features of a werewolf, dubbed him The Amazing Monster Boy, paraded the boy as an invention, and then appeared to take some unspecified moral high ground opposite his foe, Wilhelm (champion of technology and creator of the Clockwork Girl). If it appeared the writers planned to address these conundrums in the course of the story, it would give the character a great deal of depth. It instead appears from this first issue that they’ve not thought the character out very well.

Much better than the story is the art, which I enjoyed immensely. Visually, the characters are rendered in an appealing cartoony style which allows for a great deal of expressiveness. While The Clockwork Girl is anything but wordy, the panels are so well thought out and the characters’ expressions are so well drawn that the story might have worked as well or better with no dialogue at all.

A curb-hanger rather than a cliff-hanger, The Clockwork Girl ends with very little to propel readers to the next issue. I was left with the impression that Monster Boy and Clockwork Girl will simply become sweethearts in a couple of issues with no further strife, and no apparent story to tell. Despite my concerns, I think there is potential here, and I’ll almost certainly buy the next issue to see if the story picks up before the fourth and final issue rolls around.

—CCdC—

 

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