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Pitching Marvel
By Matt Yocum
Published: 2007-06-19

 


Okay, so I’ve sold a story to Marvel. It wasn’t Civil War or the Death of Captain America, but a ten-page Spider-Man backup story isn’t bad. But that’s not where I want it to end, with a small story and nothing further. So what to do? Pitch Marvel. Throw them fastballs, curveballs, knuckleballs, whatever pitches I can deliver. And hopefully they’ll take a swing at one, and when they do, I pray that swing turns into a hit.

There’s no one formula to pitching Marvel, but here’s how I’ve chosen to do it. It all starts with a story, and story starts with character. So, who to write about? Breaking out my new 50-lb copy of The Marvel Encyclopedia, I scoured the articles, looking for characters that were small enough they could be given to a new writer (not like the Fantastic Four or the Avengers who go to A-list writers) yet recognizable enough that fans would know who they were. I wanted to take someone not as well known and flesh them out.

I decided I’d do three pitches, and I chose three characters:

Art by Drew Moss for the Jasper Sitwell pitch
(click to view full image)
Jasper Sitwell (a SHIELD agent), Miss America (a golden age heroine who fought with Cap), and Madame Hydra/Madame Masque (currently villains). Jasper Sitwell was long ago a staple in Iron Man and can now be seen in Avengers: Initiative. I always saw the flat-topped, freckled agent as what Jimmy Olsen would have looked like as a SHIELD agent. A story grew in my mind about doing a humorous SHIELD book that crossed She-Hulk’s sensibilities with the Austin Powers movies. Eventually I settled on the idea that with a new SHIELD director, Tony Stark, comes a new book, and Jasper Sitwell gets to write that book. Stark tasks Sitwell to rewrite the SHIELD regulations, and since Sitwell still has operative status, each new situation he falls into leads to a new, ridiculous reg.

Now let me stop there. I’ve addressed one example of the “what” I’m going to pitch, so let me explain the “how” to pitch. Again, there’s no formula, but this is the method I’ve chosen. First the idea, which for me is a four-issue miniseries titled “By the Book” that I’ve boiled down to a single page. On this page I have a couple paragraph premise of the entire story and an issue-by-issue breakdown so a Marvel editor can see the story beats. Then I decided the best way to see a comic idea was to see actual pages. Writing the opening four pages, I looked for artists willing to work on each pitch. Four pages and a cover should be enough for someone to get the feel and tone of the book and what you’re going for.

In the case of my three pitches, I’m using Jake Bilbao, my artist for Devolution on one, and I’ve found two others for the remaining pitches. Using www.digitalwebbing.com, I scoured the artist and sequential art forums and made a few offers. The two I’d hoped for signed on at the chance to be seen by a Marvel editor. Right now I’ve got an American, Drew Moss, working on the Jasper Sitwell idea, and I found an Italian, Marco Turini, who is working the Madame Hydra/Madame Masque pitch (more on these in another column).

I’ve further refined how I pitch a story by having the art lettered. Originally, I’d send a premise page, the opening pages of art, and the opening script pages. These editors are unbelievably busy, so then I realized the best way an editor can read my script is directly over the comic art. I’m not having the pages inked or colored, hoping an editor can more easily evaluate my artists.

I’ll discuss this process and the three pitches in more detail in the next Comic Book Junkie. For now let me leave you again with the statement that there’s no one way to pitch Marvel, DC, or any comic company you’ve got your eye on. There are as many ways to pitch as there are stories to tell. The keys to remember are to be concise, professional, and tell as good a story as you are able. These editors see a lot of pitches, and the easy answer is to say no. Your job is to make them say yes.

 

Feel free to email me at myocum@comiccritique.com and if you’d like to learn more about me, go to www.mattyocum.com.

—CCdC—

 

 

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